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Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Who Knows?

How do I say
what is on my mind
when I know it's
from deep in my soul?

I'm worried the moment
may pass us by
and then you'll never know.

But if I open my mouth to speak
and the words come tumbling out,

Will you laugh and agree
or stare at me
never thinking so deep before?

How do I know
which is the right thing
for me to do?

I'll regret my choice
to say nothing at all,
so I'll just say to you:

I love you.
I need you.
I just wanted you to know:

I can't imagine
my life without you.
I never want you to go.

When I stare into
your beautiful eyes
All the world seems all right.

Without you in my life...
Who knows?

Written 6/15/09
By:Bethany M. Hart

3 comments:

  1. This is great, very sweet =]
    This piece of really stood out for me:

    "But if I open my mouth to speak
    and the words come tumbling out,
    Will you laugh and agree
    or stare at me
    never thinking so deep before?"

    I feel it just completely wraps up the whole feeling of the poem. And I can imagine how it would look if it were to take place. Wonderful!

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  2. This piece of the poem really stood out for me*

    ....stupid typos...

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  3. I really like this poem Bethany.
    I feel I can relate to a lot of it, maybe not in the exact context but yeah.
    I can't wait to hear more of your stuff.

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